Terran Leigh Radalan

[raindancer77]

TerranLeighRadalan

I was born as Terran Leigh Radalan and i have lived for fourteen winters. Behind my keyboard i am known as Kyra And i've been playing this game for three years but you might know me better asRainy

I'm not a dwarf! I'm a girl.

Name:Terran
Nickname(s):Ter,Terra,Tee
Age: Fourteen
Gender:Female
Social Class:Noble
Occupation: Healer
Race: Archenlander
Martial Status: Single
Sexuality:Straight
Face Claim: Emma Watson

Can you make me taller?

Hair: Light brown with darker brown and blonde hint of red highlights
Eyes:Hazel
Height:5’3
Weight:95
Skin Tone: Fair
Body Type: Slim
Distinguishing Marks: Four parallel claw marks on left theigh
Clothing:Dresses!just like all the other girls but with the little money her parents gave she bought herself some boy clothes in seceret.
Overall appearance:Brownish blonde hair tha falls just an inch below her shoulders.Dark hazel eyes.Slim body with fair skin.But she has a small chin.

You wouldn't believe us if we told you, sir.

Family situation:Parents dead
Father: Garrick Radalan
Mother:Desra Lavanda (before she was married)
Siblings:N/A
Extended Family:Natalie Radalan cousin on terrans fathers side
Full History:When terran was six her mother died of Scarlet fever causing her father to become a drunkard. He sent Terran away to her grandparents him in Narnia,Her grandmother taught her almost everything she knew of healing.Soon her grandmother died at age eighty her grand father hardly alive,blind,and nearly deaf only lived because he begged terran not to let him die he said the reason was because when he dies the devil and his demons will reap revenge on him and torture him for eternity.So on his orders she kept him alive even the he had worms and lung disease.
Terran then sought at Natalie her cousin who welcomed them but not very warmly for the thing that where going on in them. Terrans grand father was on her mothers side just like her grandmother who just pasted away,Terran told everything that had happedned so far in her life.Once they settled down Natalie told Terran at what happened at the ball.Terran had never met any of the king and queens of old but she had heard of them and thanks to Natalie she met them all exept Edmund whom she has a crush on when she meets him.

I wished you'd all stop acting like grown ups

Full Personality: Terran isn’t a germ freak but she washes her hands before and after meals before and after inspecting/curing a patient, And after she uses the restroom.Terran loves nature and animals as well as reading and studing.She has a bad habit of nail biting and being clutzy and fidgety around people of high status. Terran isn’t a good Dancer but she is a good singer.She is a tomboy through and through when she is inside doing chores she daydreams of being outside having adventures.Terran is kind but can be judgemental,A little bossy and sometimes rude.Terran also is very touchy and lots of little things can set her off.

At least we know that some of you can handle a sword
Rp-Sample:

Terran stood behind the counter listening to the adult woman's request,She repeated it back to her "Okay so you want a Carmel mocha with Java chips in it and...um oh ya strawberry frappé with chocolate syrup and then chocolate milk?"The woman nodded.

Terran served her order up on a cardboard tray she told the woman the cost. she paid.And left.Terran ran into the backroom the minute the door closed.Terran set to work baking more things she was very low on Bakery foods she worked and only stopped when a costumer came or she needed a break.By the time she was done it was 12:00 am she had started at 7:30 am.So terran stoked every thing then slumped down in one of the comfy cafe seats.She sta there thinking of how to raise business when she heard the little bell ring that she had tied to the door she looked up at whomever came in..................


(from another webasite)

[akira]

The staff has talked this over and unforuntly we are going to have to deny this app.

[maranichali]

So I'm gonna throw my $0.02 in..

This would be a good start to an application but you have to be more careful. I didn't see you spell Natalie's name right once and to make a good application, You have to spend a good couple of hours on it. Let your CHARACTER do the typing, not you. Tap your inner Terran, because your characters are supposed to be a part of you. Also, if Natalie is your cousin, she would go under extended family.

Some things that are concerns are your seemingly perfect appearance and an instant relationship with all the royals.. I just can't really see that being possible.

I'm not saying this to try to be mean, all of this is meant to help you become a better RPer =)

[raindancer77]

Jul 19, 2010 15:49:04 GMT -5 @maranichali said:

So I'm gonna throw my $0.02 in..



Some things that are concerns are your seemingly perfect appearance and an instant relationship with all the royals.. I just can't really see that being possible.

I'm not saying this to try to be mean, all of this is meant to help you become a better RPer =)

What do you mean by perfect appearance and instant relationship with the royals?

[Susan Pevensie]

Terran had never met any of the king and queens of old but she had heard of them and thanks to Natalie she met them all exept Edmund whom she has a crush on when she meets him.

Brownish blonde hair tha falls just an inch below her shoulders.Dark hazel eyes.Slim body with fair skin.But she has a small chin.

that's what we mean with it. Plus it is both god moding and mary sue to instantly say that you're gonna be good buddies with other characters, without asking perdition and already saying you have a crush on a character when you haven't met him/her

DENIED
Sorry, but with this app we can not accept you in TNA. It is simply to short and you show some serious signs of being a Mary Sue, to which you even said in the C-Box you were.